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Assess. Improve. Execute

By Jim Connolly | July 10, 2024

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Today, I’m going to open-up a marketing idea with you that helped me increase a client’s sales results by just over 180% in 9-months.

It can be summed up in 3 words: Assess. Improve. Execute.

Here’s how it works.

Assess

The first step to improving your sales results is to assess your current situation. I spent some time digging into my client’s sales and marketing process and identified his company’s primary problem. It turned out they offered a superb service and when the right prospects learned about it, they absolutely loved it. This means I needed to greatly increase the number of high-quality prospects he got in front of.

Once we identified the root of his problem, it was time to improve things and free my client to dramatically increase his company’s sales results.

Improve

There was a number of areas in my client’s marketing that were under-performing. And others, he should never have used. You see, like almost every small business I’ve met, my client had been focusing time, and money, on lead generation. BIG mistake.

By making a small number of essential improvements at the very beginning, we were able to considerably increase his results. And fast.

I remember the easiest adjustment I made, was to improve the focus of their marketing message. It had previously focused on what their business did, how great their service was and how amazing their team was. 

If your marketing has a similar focus, it’s a bad, bad idea!

And here’s why.

No one buys a service or a product. They buy the result. For example, you don’t buy exercise equipment.
You ‘buy’ looking good and feeling great. So, sell the result of investing in your service or product.

Anyhow, we then dug a little deeper and uncovered a series of similarly untapped, windfall opportunities.

One of them was for us to switch the focus of their marketing copy. I needed it to make prospects feel massively more curious.

Curious?

Why curious, Jim?

Think about it. Every client or customer enquiry you have ever had, or will ever receive, only happened because that person needed to know something. So, if you want your marketing to attract massively more prospects, it needs to create more curiosity… and answer fewer questions.

Previously, their marketing tried to answer as many questions as possible.

  • I made sure it provided just enough information.
  • Just enough information to inform the prospect and magnify their curiosity.
  • Just enough information to compel, motivate and inspire eager prospects to contact them with a high-quality enquiry.

We wrapped these ideas into a plan, along with half a dozen other tactical improvements. Now we were good to go!

Execute

In a recent newsletter, I mentioned the importance of energy and excitement. Without doubt, this is the stage of working with my small business clients that excites me most. It’s why I do what I do.

Assess.

Improve.

Execute.

Focus like a laser on those 3-steps. Do it correctly and literally watch your business grow.

Why you need a story. From the original Mad Man

By Jim Connolly | March 18, 2024

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Someone asked me why her business needed a story. She thought it was, “a load of trendy nonsense”.

When I answered her question, she emailed me back to say it had changed her perception completely. She said it would improve her approach to marketing forever.

So today, I decided to share my answer with you. I hope you find it just as useful.

Why your business needs a story

My answer begins with a quote from advertising legend, David Ogilvy. Ogilvy was the inspiration behind the hit TV show, Mad Men.

Here’s what he had to say.

“There isn’t any significant difference between the various brands of whiskey, or cigarettes or beer. They are all about the same”. “[…] The manufacturer who dedicates his advertising to building the most sharply defined personality for his brand will get the largest share of the market at the highest profit”.

That message isn’t new. It was written decades ago, as you can tell from the examples he uses. But it’s even more valid in 2024, than when Ogilvy shared it.

Think about it. Apple’s iPhone is the best selling mobile phone in the world, despite being one of the most expensive. It doesn’t have the best display, the best camera, the best signal reception or the best battery life.

But it does have the best story.

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Emotions drive decisions

Your prospective clients or customers are motivated by emotions, far more than logic. The way they feel about you and your brand, is what will drive their decision to hire you, buy from you and recommend you. And it’s your story, which determines how they feel about you. (I explain why in this post, Does your business pass the coffee shop test?, which you might find useful).

Build a story, my friend. A story that people will embrace and share.

Is it easy? No. It takes a little creativity.

Is it possible? Yes. Very possible.

Is it worth the effort? Absolutely.

Write tight

By Jim Connolly | March 7, 2024

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The infinite space on the Internet encourages overlong writing.

And people have never had shorter attention spans.

Write tight.

Keep it short.

Be understood.

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How to increase your email marketing open rates

By Jim Connolly | March 4, 2024

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One area I often get asked about, is how to improve email marketing open rates. So, I thought I’d share 10 of the most common reasons why emails remain unopened.

In no particular order.

1. The recipient of your email uses Gmail

Gmail automatically dumps valid emails into the recipient’s promotions folder. This means they get no notification when your emails arrive. As such, open rates plummet. I know from personal experience that my Gmail newsletter subscribers miss over 90% of my emails, unless they’ve added my email address to their contacts list. This happens, even though they used Gmail to double opt-in to receive my stuff.

2. Your email subject line didn’t motivate the recipient to open it

Obviously, people only discover how valuable or interesting your email is, after they’ve read it. To read it they need to open it and to open it, the email subject line needs to motivate them. It needs to compel them to want to find out. Getting this right is trickier than it sounds. That’s because many of the words used to inspire people to open an email, are also triggers for junk mail filters.

3. You sent the email at the wrong time of day or on the wrong day

This can have a massive impact. Despite what some people say, there’s no universally ideal day or perfect time to optimize email open rates. For example, different timing is required for when you target consumers, compared to when you target businesses. Different times also work better for different industries. For example, hotels work completely different hours than accountants. They also have totally different peak times, when they’re unavailable to check email and are least likely to see your message. One time doesn’t work for all. Test and measure until you find your email open rate sweet-spot.

4. The recipient’s email address is on a list you bought

If you’re using a list you bought, rather than one you grew yourself, you’re emailing strangers. And to make things worse, the strangers on these ‘sold lists’ get bombarded with tons of marketing emails, from all the others who bought their email address. This means they’re far more likely to have very, very aggressive email filters.

5. Your list is out of date

Some people work so hard to build their list, that they very seldom remove inactive contacts from it. As a result their lists contain lots of addresses that no longer exist or are no longer monitored. Non-existent email addresses will register as ‘bounces’, and are easily cleaned with email marketing software. Unmonitored addresses, for example, when someone’s left a company, but their email hasn’t been deleted from the system, can still receive emails, so they don’t bounce. Most email marketing software will let you automatically delete contacts after ‘X’ number go unopened. Use it.

6. The content of a previous email didn’t engage the reader

Your next email campaign’s open rate will be impacted by how successful your last email campaign was. The people who failed to engage with your previous campaign, will be less motivated to open the next one. Remember: You never have ‘a list’. You need to earn and re-earn their permission. So stay useful.

7. You send marketing emails direct from your desktop email software

This is a universally terrible idea. Always use a trusted, commercial email marketing provider. These providers can deliver over 99% of your emails every time. By sending your marketing emails via your computer’s regular email program, even to a relatively small list, your IP address can get blacklisted for sending too many identical emails. Once blacklisted, your emails won’t even reach the recipient’s junk folder. Tip: You can check if your IP address is blocked, using Spamhaus.

8. The email content triggered email filters

One of the ways your email junk filter protects you from spam, is by checking the content of incoming emails. If an email contains certain words, this increases the likelihood of that email being junked. These words range from swear words, to words and phrases often used by spammers. Tip: Think hard about the wording you use in your calls-to-action.

9. The email contained too many links or images.

This is closely connected to the previous point. One of the tricks spammers use to bypass junk filters, is to hide their spammy words in images, rather than write the words in regular text. Another common factor in spam is the use of lots of links; certainly more than a regular email might have. So, go easy on the number of images and links.

10. You built your list by offering a freebie

Something internet marketing gurus often fail to mention, is that people seldom use their primary email addresses for give-aways. If your list was built on the back of offering lead magnets, be aware that a subset of the contacts on your list may not be regularly monitored.

Email is a spectacularly powerful marketing tool. And sometimes just a few improvements can lead to dramatically better results. So, take a look at the above points. See if you can identify anything you’re missing, which will improve your email marketing open rates.

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Attract more customer enquiries, the friendly way!

By Jim Connolly | December 18, 2023

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Here’s a quick marketing tip, which can help you attract more customer (or client) enquiries. I hope you find it useful.

It starts with a question: How easy is it for your prospective customers to get in touch with you?

I’m not asking how visible your contact information is on your marketing materials. I’m referring to something that is almost as important and yet seldom written about; how approachable or friendly you seem, to prospects who don’t already know you.

For example.

  • When a prospect is reading your newsletter, how approachable do you sound to them? The best newsletters are written so that the author comes across as friendly, informed and interested in helping you. The least effective are written by people who come across as impersonal, distant and only interested in what’s in it for them.
  • When a prospect reads your comments on social media, how approachable do you sound to them? Some business owners can appear sarcastic, rude or even confrontational when people dialogue with them or ask questions. This is a really, really bad move if you want prospects to feel comfortable enough to contact you.
  • When a prospect reads the about page on your website, how approachable do you sound? Many small business owners write their about page in the 3rd person, rather than speak directly to their reader. Instead of saying; ‘Hi, thanks for stopping by. My name is Jordan and…’ they start with ‘Jordan has worked in web design since 2012 and… ‘

Why should this matter to you?

Here’s what we know for absolute certain. The less comfortable someone feels about approaching a potential service provider, the less likely they are to contact them.

By including a friendly, human touch in your marketing, you start to nurture a positive impression in the mind of your prospects, long before you ever speak with them. This helps them feel far more comfortable contacting you, hiring you or buying from you. 

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Write short. Be understood

By Jim Connolly | November 24, 2023

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People’s attention spans have never been shorter. This includes your prospective clients or customers, which is why your writing needs to get to the point. Fast. This is something known as, writing short.

Writing short

As you’ll know if you’ve followed my work for a while, I’m an advocate of learning how to write short. (Roy Peter Clark introduced the phrase to me). It’s not for everything you write. Just for those times when space is limited or you want to get an extremely focused message across.

Here are some specific examples, where writing short is essential.

  • Email subject lines.
  • Tweets.
  • Event hand-outs.
  • Advertising copy.
  • Store signs.
  • Elevator pitches.
  • Messaging on products / packaging.
  • Political slogans.
  • Headlines.
  • Banners.
  • Social media profiles.
  • Flyers.
  • Vehicle signage.
  • Website buttons.
  • Calls to action.

That kind of thing.

So, what’s the problem?

By default, most business owners write long and see no reason to write short. And it’s perfectly understandable why this happens.

Think about it.

The internet provides you with endless writing space. You can add an unlimited number of pages to a website, with an unlimited number of words on each page. Your newsletter or marketing emails can be as long as you wish. In other words, you have far more space than you need.

So on the face of it, you have very little motivation to use fewer words than you currently do.

Except you really have.

Write short: The rewards are huge

That’s why I strongly recommend you learn to write with as few words as necessary. It’s a great way to improve your email open rates, get better advertising results, improve your click through rates, get prospects to take action and lots, lots more.

To get you started, here’s some tips on how to write short, from the best writers in the world.

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